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The sight of Uncle Scrooge's vault -- so deep he could DIVE into the money! -- was quite an inspiration to a kid who brought down a cool quarter an hour for babysitting. I would sit and stare at all that money and wonder what he had done for a living. Definitely not babysitting. I am not sure that I ever even had possessed a twenty-dollar bill until I was in college. I'm not sorry -- I am glad that I grew up appreciating the value of a dollar and working for every penny.

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Max, this is off topic unless you allow that you write about writers be they writers of novels, poems, comics books, or songs. But here is my request, I wish you would do a column on compression as in lyric compression. All writers know the weight of their words and use them sparingly, like your comic book writers. All writers especially good lyricists have this ability to tell stories, evoke emotions, transport the listener to another time and place, or strike deep into a listener’s psyche with a few, sometimes a very few, well chose words. What follows are some examples that came to mind to whet your imagination.

My all-time favorite bit of musical transportation was written by: George Gershwin and Rick Wakeman:

Summertime and the livin' is easy

Fish are jumpin' and the cotton is high

Your daddy's rich and your ma is good-lookin'

So hush, little baby, don't you cry…

Boom! By these few lines, by these simple images, the listener is not only transported to an enchanted summer of his youth, he is faced with a conundrum. In his summertime place of memory, he suddenly has to know why baby is crying. An Arcadian pastoral should never be shattered by tears and wailing. The hook is in and our listener must hear the whole song.

Like your comic books another all-time classic, imprinted on every American child, was written by Harold Arlen and E.Y. Harburg (not to mention Ira Gershwin, whose contribution you mentioned a few weeks ago, which got me thinking about this topic):

Somewhere over the rainbow

Way up high

There's a land that I heard of

Once in a lullaby…

Anyone who has seen the movie or had the pleasure of listening to Judy Garland sing these words knows the song and relates to it, because it transports the listener to comfort, mother, and intimate moments shared with a trusted loved one evoked by the word lullaby.

As comforting as the above lyrics are, our comfort can also be shattered. All we have to do is turn to Paul Simon and hear:

Hello darkness, my old friend

I've come to talk with you again…

Instantly we are locked into loneliness or even into the darkest moment of our lives. Ironically, this, too, is a hook, and we must listen to the end of the song, because a good lyrist may walk the listener into darkness, but will never leave him there.

Even some hard-rock songs can produce good bits of compression. As an example, allow me to cite Jimmy Steinman’s Bat out of Hell:

The sirens are screaming and the fires are howling

Way down in the valley tonight

There's a man in the shadows with a gun in his eye

And a blade shining, oh, so bright

There's evil in the air, there's thunder in the sky

And a killer's on the bloodshot streets…

The listener is now in a place where he would rather not be, because it’s creepy, discomfiting, and likely dangerous. But as with “hello darkness” above, he must listen his way out of the horror.

Now, compare those lyrics with Mack the Knife, credited to: Bertolt Brecht, Marc Blitzstein, and Kurt Weill

Oh the shark, babe, has such teeth, dear

And it shows them pearly white

Just a jackknife has old MacHeath, babe

And he keeps it out of sight

You know when that shark bites with his teeth, babe

Scarlet billows start to spread

Fancy gloves though wears old MacHeath, babe

So there's never, never a trace of red…

Brecht et al are far more subtle, less direct, in their presentation of horror than Steinman. Indeed, their words are almost inviting in that there’s “never a trace of red.”

One of my great favorites, and it’s because I love Frank Sinatre, is Summer Wind, Written by: Johnny Mercer, Henry Mayer, and Hans Bradtke

The summer wind came blowin' in from across the sea

It lingered there to touch your hair and walk with me

All summer long, we sang a song

And then we strolled that golden sand

Two sweethearts and the summer wind…

Anyone who knows anything about Frank Sinatra and Ava Gardner, on hearing these words, can see them strolling that “golden sand” and wonder where it all went wrong. It was a love that blew away like the summer wind. It’s a universal experience I dare say.

Lastly, I cannot leave this topic without quoting my late, great compatriot Gordon Lightfoot. I offer this compression of history from the last chorus of the Canadian Railway Trilogy without comment:

Oh, there was a time in this fair land when the railroad did not run

When the wild majestic mountains stood alone against the sun

Long before the white man and long before the wheel

When the green dark forest was too silent to be real

When the green dark forest was too silent to be real

And many are the dead men

Too silent to be real.

Max, I am only citing a few lyrical passages that came to my mind, and I am sure you have much more to add to this discussion. Call me greedy or hungry, but I would love to read what you have to write on this topic.

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